Call for critique.

by Paul Brown on 15 October 2002

Read this and despair…

I was hoping that someone would have read that entry and make constructive
criticism.  Then I remembered – I hadn’t asked for any.  So now
I do.

Let me know what you think of the story – you can, of course, make any comments
you want, but I’m more interested in what you like and/or dislike about the
way it’s written.

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